Chapter 1 Page 6
REAL FAST WHEE
And in comes Munkustrap. Yayz. I did this pretty damn quickly, which is obvious. *laughs* But it came out alright. I'm focusing more on the scene than the detail anyway.
Yay! A new page! I admire your art and story skills.
You did a good job on the emotions here. Teazer's face in panel two is good, and I can imagine her voice when she screams. Jerrie's face in the panel is good, too; I particularly like the eyelid thing on his left eye. Making Munk's eyes dark was a good choice, and having Jerrie wave his hand in front of Teazer's face was also good. The middle panel is good, too. Teazer cowering was a nice touch.
All in all a good page. :)
This is a great page! I can see Mungo popping his thumb in his mouth and whimpering ^_^
The way you illustrated Munkus is great too! The dark eyes and pose *thumbs up*
Munkustrap to the rescue!!! X33 Jerry is quite right here - they're dead.
Even though the page is rushed, I think it's really good, especially concerning their emotions and such. Wish my stuff would look that great when rushed... >.>;;
munkustap is extremely sexy in that picture. not that i don't already think he is... ;P *giggles* UPDATE!!! QUICK!!! before I die of suspence!
I originally found this on DA. I fell in love at first sight. You are WONDERFUL! you are a talented artist and author. You give the Jellicles all their spunk and personality. And I want to steal all their clothes. Bravo to you!
Hey, been trawling the internet for *good* Jellicle fandom/fanfiction/art/what-have-you ....and holy crap, I think I love you. Or, at least your comic. It is hands-down the best thing I've found so far in this fandom. Your characterizations and world-building are truly something to be enjoyed, something I've found precious little of so far. Admittedly, I'm a total snob, but hey, we all have our sins. I love where this looks to be going, so I look forward to seeing more! <3
...wee, Munk looks really badass down there.
But...is it me or is he wearing shades??
oh, you have to put this ind DA. Many of your fans haven't seen these pages yet, I guess...share the love! *bows down repeatedly*
AWWww! for some reason I have the urge to hug Rumpelteazer after seeing her cower in panel three.
Heh, very funny. Did have to look up what Gordon Bennett meant, but suitable for Jerrie to say. Just one question: are you going to have Quaxo be Mistoffelees, too, or is Misto not going to be in the comic at all?
The DJG pretty much makes my life. You, Crispy-gypsy, have combined the two greatest Cat-related things on the planet to create the ULIMATE comic.
I love how Munkustrap can stop a car just by glaring at it. Oh, and your Misto is adorable.
This comic is really interesting so far. I hope you continue to update. I want to see what happens badly.
What an exciting concept and an even more exciting first issue! I can't wait for the next page.